Smileys

Voici toute une série de smileys pour illustrer vos comms ! ;-)

Il vous suffit de copier le code correspondant au smiley que vous avez choisi, et le l'écrire tel quel dans votre comm, avec le signe : juste avant et juste après. Ex : :0000:

A vous !

 

0101
0014
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Petit rappel du sujet :

Expression (100 words minimum)
Friar Lawrence explains what has happened to the Capulets and the Montaigues when they discover the bodies of their children. Write the dialogue, using at least (au moins) 3 present perfect simple and 1 present perfect continuous (BE + -ing).
NB : mourir = to die / died / died

Present Perfect Simple :   / 3
Present Perfect Continuous :   / 1
Style, ideas :    / 4


Copie n° 4
(NB : les copies sont recopiées telles quelles, non corrigées. En bleu, mes commentaires, lorsque ça a été plus fort que moi...)

Laura (?) : What passing when Capulets and Montaigues discover the bodies of their children ?

Friar Lawrence : So, during this week-end, the Capulets and Montaigues have been mareidous (? illisible). You children died because Juliet loved Romeo. The capulet have discovered that their daughter has been loving Romeo. Romeo is poet, dramaturge, is wrote comedies and tragedies. (OH !!!!!!!!!!! C'est Shakespeare !!!!!!!!!!!!!) That's why they love been very sad !

Laura : Ah ! What have think this family ?

Friar Lawrence : This family is nice because the nurce was generous ! (?) This father was very eaury (? illisible)

Laura : Ah, ok. is very tragedies and very sad ! :-(

Friar Lawrence : Yes ! is very sad !


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Dimanche 26 avril 2009
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Petit rappel du sujet :

Expression (100 words minimum)
Friar Lawrence explains what has happened to the Capulets and the Montaigues when they discover the bodies of their children. Write the dialogue, using at least (au moins) 3 present perfect simple and 1 present perfect continuous (BE + -ing).
NB : mourir = to die / died / died

Present Perfect Simple :   / 3
Present Perfect Continuous :   / 1
Style, ideas :    / 4



Copie n° 3
(NB : les copies sont recopiées telles quelles, non corrigées. En bleu, mes commentaires, lorsque ça a été plus fort que moi...)

Friar Lawrence : Hello, the Montaigus (Mr and Mrs Montaigues) and the Capulets (idem), but I am sorry but the bodies of Romeo and Juliet's have discovered. They are die. It's difficult explain because, they loved.

Families : but…

Friar Lawrence : They are die for you because Romeo and Juliet wanted what this fight stop.

Families : But their meet weren't impossible.

Friar Lawrence : have you ever seen Romeo with Juliet ? TB

Familie : No.

Friar Lawrence : So, it was passion, they have just married, they were empoisement for stop this fight.

Familie : Don't speak, our children died. their bodies have just discovered. go.

Friar Lawrence : ok bye. !

Style et intérêt discutables.


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Vendredi 24 avril 2009
- Par Profette - Publié dans : Les Zélèves

Petit rappel du sujet :

Expression (100 words minimum)
Friar Lawrence explains what has happened to the Capulets and the Montaigues when they discover the bodies of their children. Write the dialogue, using at least (au moins) 3 present perfect simple and 1 present perfect continuous (BE + -ing).
NB : mourir = to die / died / died

Present Perfect Simple :   / 3
Present Perfect Continuous :   / 1
Style, ideas :    / 4


Copie n° 2

(NB : les copies sont recopiées telles quelles, non corrigées. En bleu, mes commentaires, lorsque ça a été plus fort que moi...)

the Capulet : What are you do when you are discover your (!) childrens ?

Lawrence : I have been surprised but I have told the police.

the Capulet : How many childrens had you ?

Lawrence : 2 childrens, very young.

the Capulet : what are you speack the police ?

Laurence : they told me if I said who killed us. (!)

the Capulet : You said ?

Lawrence : No, because I supposed 2 persons.

the Capulet : Who ? They go to the diabless ! (oh !)

Lawrence : Tybalt and Paris.
?
Mais quel livre as-tu lu ??

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Mercredi 22 avril 2009
- Par Profette - Publié dans : Les Zélèves

Petit rappel du sujet :

Expression (100 words minimum)
Friar Lawrence explains what has happened to the Capulets and the Montaigues when they discover the bodies of their children. Write the dialogue, using at least (au moins) 3 present perfect simple and 1 present perfect continuous (BE + -ing).
NB : mourir = to die / died / died

Present Perfect Simple :   / 3
Present Perfect Continuous :   / 1
Style, ideas :    / 4


Copie n° 1

(NB : les copies sont recopiées telles quelles, non corrigées. En bleu, mes commentaires, lorsque ça a été plus fort que moi...)

"The Capulets and the Montaigues have fought more !" (again ?)

Friar Lawrence ran, he was tired. ??

"More !? Why ? Everydays there is an discovery ! It's impossible ! We  _ have got something !" ????????????

"I think they told about a mariage or other somethings. He (qui ???) cryied ! I didn't understand that they said !" (moi non plus !)

"This for so many times, they have fought always ! We will to do leave city before that there is a die !"

He (mais qui ??) moved to Friar Lawrence.

"This night, they (?) leaving this city forever ! Say their !"

C'est incompréhensible.
Qui sont les personnages ???
 

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Lundi 20 avril 2009
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